This one's really giving me a headache--I just can't seem to get everything sketched out right. I'll finish it later when I can stand to look at it. Suggestions would be helpful.

Hi! First time drawing on one of these--it's a lot harder than it looks X_X I'll try and finish her later, after I work up the courage. Hopefully I won't ruin her with color.

Slight ref for the pose from an artbook of mine.

EDIT: Finished :)