Please, please, please, AVOID the fill tool. It makes pieces look.... well not good, and you have to go back and fill in all those little spaces. Use layers. One to sketch, one to ink, and another to color. Also, please spend more than 3 minutes on a piece. This is not a doodle place. You have more than enough space, go back, fill in the lines. Maybe add some details. If your just sketching there's no need to send. It's a fair picture, but spend more time on it it'll be better. Welcome.

Well thanks for the info Sweetcell I might go back and make some toon up and toy with some crap, but anyway danke