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Lirael (Jun 5, 2008)

Hmm, first oekaki here. I'm not too satisfied though. Hope I'm not doing anything wrong, and you like the image :)

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ilovedrawing (Jul 6, 2008)

thanks for the comment! I like the rain effect (affect?) it's really good for a first... just keep practicing and I can tell you'll be amazing! :]

Lirael (Jul 7, 2008)

thanks =) it's rain effect. 'Affect' is the verb (to affect something) while 'effect' is a noun.

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Lirael (Jul 6, 2008)

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ilovedrawing (Jul 6, 2008)

the drawing is very good! just try to smooth the outlining :]

Lirael (Jul 7, 2008)

okay, thanks =) I intently softened the colour and made the outlining sharp, but I guess smooth outlining would be great too =]

snow

ilovedrawing (Jul 6, 2008)

Well the backround is quite... interesting. But I didn't know what to do..

any tips? :]

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Lirael (Jul 6, 2008)

It is a nice drawing. But it seems like it has two styles. The background & hair are smooth lines, while the rest (face) is more sketchy. It contrasts a bit, though I think it's maybe more of a a style issue. The background is okay, but I think the colors are too vivid in comparison to the rest of the picture. Anyway, I like the shading on the face and love the eyes. ^^

whipcream (Jul 8, 2008)

so cute!! i love her hair stlye!! :)

Ceasement (Aug 6, 2008)

And thank you for your comments! :D
Not so talented really, just a perfectionist XD

Moving on: I love all the details in her face, especially in the eyes.
I have to say, the scarf looks comfy :3
It's a very pretty drawing ^-^

Apple

TamaTama (Jun 5, 2008)

whoops fogot the the stem lol

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Lirael (Jun 5, 2008)

It's really nice how it stands out. You could work on the shading (it isn't too realistic) but the image is quite nice already!

TamaTama (Jun 5, 2008)
drawn in 1 min

there! Its perfect no!

Chibi Moon

hiei14 (May 29, 2008)

I hate my mouse. : /

Anyway, drawing of Chibi Moon from Sailor Moon.

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Lirael (May 30, 2008)

Quite nice really, especially considering it's done with a mouse. However, personally I think the lines are too thick, too 'heavy' - they dominate the picture, and I don't think that's the intention. You could try using a thinner brush for the lineart, and maybe a lighter color. The face, shading and colors are nice though :)