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Music seems to be a prevalent element in my art. Hm.

Well, you cought Marrow dancing. He likes to put on his headphones and dance like a fool when he's alone, but he's too shy and insecure to do so in front of anyone else. He goes to clubs with friends but never goes out onto the floor.

I like the BG. Lyrics by Garbage, "I'm only happy when it rains"

7 comments – latest 4:

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Well, what's the point of feedback if you don't get anything from it? Personally, Even ONE precise comment ("Like your coloring" or whatever) is infinitly more satisfying than 1000 "Tha's nice" comments. I know it's nice. I wanna know why.

As for my style... How much more vague can you get? Might as well say "I like the cut of your jib."

UppityCracker (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Ok, you want a critique? Here we go..
The character design is weak, it is sloppy and unpolished. If you really want to define the character do a few detail sketches of body parts, such as the face. Your "style" needs to be defined more.. I mean is your character floating in space or standing? Space is very important in placing the whole scene.
What IS good about it though is that you have a form and an idea, and I'm sure in your mind it is alot clearer.
Just keep practicing man, practice makes perfect. Don't let the shit that I say get to you. Take it as constructive criticism
I don't mean to judge it too much, and art is art, if you mean it to be a sketch then forget what I say. Keep practicing on human form, like how a person stands and the movement of legs and arms. I know my stuff isnt perfect and need to work on it alot more.. ok, i'll stop now.

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Dont' let it get to me? Lessons already learned. That which does not kill me, et all.

If I DIDNT want a crit, I wouldn't post. Thanks.

darkk_angel (edited Mar 28, 2003)

Good idea, but the lineart is a tad bit messy.... if you cleaned it up a tad bit and added more shadows and color to the picture, and a better background it would be awesome.

botak v2 (with sword)

coffeejelly (Feb 19, 2003)

i don't know what i was thinking. i don't know why he turned out bald.
and the rectangle below is there because... i only found out about the excess space after i finished the main picture X'D
anyways, this is a silly picture
<edit>
added the sword X'D i think it looks vaguely like a sword X'D

8 comments – latest 4:

Knockoff (edited Feb 20, 2003)

This is cool. I love the sword!

Kazukie (edited Feb 21, 2003)

I think the sword deffinitly finishes it off well. =]

mauvemalady (edited Mar 5, 2003)

Why bald? Why hair? I like him bald. I like his attitude here. It's soft, too, which is nice--takes the edge off the sword and all it implies.

darkk_angel (edited Mar 27, 2003)

i like this!!! it doesnt look bad at all!! and i didnt notice the rectangle until you mentioned it.....
and the baldness of it all actually suits the character.... and the facial structure!!

ANGRY!!!

Minitsaru (Feb 21, 2003)

Well i was angry but now........ i dunno im not that angry any more cuz... well this is my best drawing using my comp class' computers....
what do you think?

3 comments – latest 3:

Knockoff (edited Feb 21, 2003)

Its pretty good. The green highlights are cool.

Kazukie (edited Feb 21, 2003)

I like the hair too.. He does look angry! =]

darkk_angel (edited Mar 27, 2003)

reasonably good.... add multiple depths of shade to it!!! anyhow... i am a total critic... hehe really, it is good.... dont mind me *sits and hums in a corner while rocking back and forth*

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before

TIMMYMOUSE (Mar 17, 2003)

were going to war

11 comments – latest 4:

Knockoff (edited Mar 18, 2003)

Yea Akane. You didnt know. Its only a count down till we fight them,. =(

Akane (edited Mar 18, 2003)

this is sooo fucking redickulos!!!

Thornofsin (edited Mar 19, 2003)

I like the name but....damn I hope no after attacks happen because I live in the middle of the Pacific ocean with no where to go!!!!

Survival_Horror (edited Mar 27, 2003)

LOL,love the teeth!

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Realistic Attempt

ChinkyFlip (Feb 6, 2003)

*Sigh.* -_- What the hell is up with the animation.. *Groan.*

8 comments – latest 4:

rosalyn (edited Feb 10, 2003)

WOW....*stars in amazment* You're good..^^

Samwise (edited Feb 26, 2003)

That looks really pretty. Good job =D

Knockoff (edited Feb 26, 2003)

I love the shading on this. Your sooooo good chinky. You Rock!

darkk_angel (edited Mar 27, 2003)

woah!! nice picture!! the only problem is with the animation.... yikes!!!! hahaha.... anyhow, HOW DO YOU DRAW SO WELL?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

lick me!

nobuyuki (Jan 30, 2003)

E is for Everyone.

2 comments – latest 2:

Knockoff (edited Jan 31, 2003)

This is neat. The tung is cool.

darkk_angel (edited Mar 26, 2003)

i like the facial expression.... draw ears!!! kitty cat ears!!

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Another damn scary clown

UppityCracker (Feb 25, 2003)

so.. afraid...

9 comments – latest 4:

oz0005 (edited Feb 25, 2003)

wow, yeah i really like ur style, what u guys say about oekaki i say about paintbbs hehe, i don't understand how u guys use that, it's crazy well nice job !

Knockoff (edited Feb 26, 2003)

Wow. This is fraeaky.! I like this.

Samwise (edited Feb 26, 2003)

Now I'm gonnah start having Nightmares XD

darkk_angel (edited Mar 25, 2003)

woah... i nearly had a heart attack!!! i dislike scary clowns.... and there are no other varieties!!!

Now he's mad...

WerefoxLeBlanc (Feb 26, 2003)

Uh-oh! It looks like, despite his piercings, clipped ears, attidude, and bleached patterns in his fur, someone mistook Marrow's age as being far less than it actually is! And Marrow hates being treated like he's twelve years younger than he actually is.

I was going for action and dynamics in this pic. I like it.

7 comments – latest 4:

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Wow you have a whole race made up don't you? =P Cute..

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Nope. Kit Foxes are real animals, similar to Swift Foxes.

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Really? Awww then I want one!!!

darkk_angel (edited Mar 25, 2003)

nice one man.... i like the expression