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concannon and quintessence (Sep 11, 2004)
My character, Tris. Colored by quintessence. ^__^
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Goatlord (Sep 11, 2004)
Her head should actually be much larger towards the top; the way the hair is parted, it makes it look like she has a very small cranial area. The eyes are also spaced too much (there is about an eye's length between the eyes). The ear is also too low; it should actually be about level with the eyes. The neck is also a bit long, and makes the shoulders look a bit flat. It's a good attempt, though.
davincipoppalag (Sep 11, 2004)
She's from a place where there was a lot of inbreeding Goat... Her father/uncle/brother and her Sister/mother/aunt think she's quite beautiful as she is.
concannon (edited Sep 12, 2004)
Okay, wow. -__- Goatlord, sweetie, when I attempt realism, you'll know it. This was not a realism attempt. See the lineart? That means there's still a vague cartoony aspect too it. And yeah, I realize all those things; in addition, her shoulders are actually too small for her head size, or her head is actually too big for her shoulder size.

Either way, it's art, and I can draw any way I damn well please. [PS]: I realize that most of that was probably constructive criticism, but it seems a little high and mighty too. I didn't mean to snap if you meant well.
Goatlord (Sep 12, 2004)
Eh, it's cool. I know it's intended to be cartoony, but it was just lacking proportion, really. All young artists start out that way, I know I did.
drawn in 4 hours 10 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
 
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