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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Mar 12, 2006)
... not done |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Mar 13, 2006)
Drew this for a friend |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Oct 20, 2005)
blargh...not the best of my works..but still |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Jul 26, 2005)
"^_^
renire (Jul 27, 2005)
cool, it looks like something of xiaolin showdown! :D :D :D :D |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Jun 4, 2005)
teh moi! |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Sep 30, 2004)
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Shanghai (Apr 9, 2005)
It's a nice setup with how you've postioned the characters, but personally I think you have a more practice to do before you will have "mastered the basic skills of drawing" as this intermediate board description says. I'll give you a few pointers that may help, a lot of people do some of the things I'm seeing you do here- it looks like you've tried to draw the hands the way hands look, since you've added lines of fingers and such, but a common mistake is to make hands disproportionately small. Hands should really be almost as long as the distance from a person's chin to their hairline when the hand is held flat, and making a fist with them wouldn't make them as small as what you've drawn. Another thing is that some of the shading is smooth but some of it is rough and I don't think the two styles are really looking like the fit together here. The same goes for the lines, some are smooth but many are very rough. Try to be consistant with one style or another, and if you purposefully make them rough then you're going to have to do it in a way that it looks like you meant it to be like that, not just because you weren't able to make it smooth. A way that would make it look purposeful was if the picture had a mood or emotion in it that needed rough lines, like anxiety or panic.
George_Goat (Apr 10, 2005)
I looked back on your previous version of this picture, and you do seem to do linework well. You'll probably want to work on coloring/shading and backgrounds, though. Though Redpanda gave a lot of good advice already it seems. ^^
Cheese_is_good (Apr 19, 2005)
SQUEEEEE! JE T'AIME!!!! I ISH SHOOO KAWAII!!!!! MERK IS TOO AND SO IS YOU!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAY! Ps: I lurve your site soooo muchly. I'm going to make anotjher one like that, for gaia, andyou're going to be on it! love you!!! xoxo-Cheese
p3ndragon (May 29, 2005)
What the hell^?Redpanda, you should keep that comment handy for all the other ones like this. :D |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Mar 6, 2005)
all that jazz
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
White fox demon angel? That's quite a mouthful, not to mention an oxymoron. Anyways, I know it isn't finish, but I was thinking that maybe you should consider using smaller "spikes" for the hair, since hair doesn't really clump together into such large spikes like that. This sort of has an Egyptian look to it. Maybe you could push that a little more by using some Egyptian references? Just a thought.
Cheese_is_good (Mar 7, 2005)
Oo I like the piccu,but coconut, yo cant be a white fox demon angel. That's just trying to, how could I say it, your attempt at upstaging me. Neva gonna happen. Sowwy!
Dragon_River_Spirit (Mar 8, 2005)
...your still the top demon....the angel part was only to describe the piccy...im only a demon with wings and your still the better demon cheese
Shmoopy (May 27, 2005)
The hands are extremely small. Red, I think the drawer is going for some sort of 'anime' approach, so the hair is spiky. I'd like to see the parents of this creature.An albino fox mates with a demon, who was so nice he became an angel. Dah. :D |
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Shanghai (edited Apr 25, 2005)
I don't want to sound mean, but I've mentioned to you in the past that honestly I don't see anything here that says "intermediate quality" to me. I think there's so much more you could have done to this to improve it that you didn't do, and I think you can judge for yourself after looking at the rest of the intermediate board what this is lacking.
Maiko (Apr 25, 2005)
this isn't intermediate quality :\
Xodiak (Apr 26, 2005)
I like it. <:)|XOD| |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Apr 25, 2005)
FOR MY GUILD ON GAIAfinis
Destervetha (Apr 26, 2005)
I like the face structure, and the facial expression is so well done :3 |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Apr 23, 2005)
YAAY a pic thingy for gaia online |
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