I still like it unfinished, it has a dreamy quality to it...

i painted this exact same picture
p.s. yours looks better

Sh'es pretty, and I like her pose. The hairs my favorite part actually.

I'd say the mouth is a bit too high, too near her nose. Just needs to be lowered a little. The shape of her head is odd, when you look at a face at this angle it starts off as you have it on the forehead, turns in at the eye, then the cheek (all of which looks right) but it doesn't curve so sharply in towards the neck, it flares out just a bit as it get's to the chin, then forms the chin (I don't know if any of that makes sense, it's so much easier doing than writing) Her chin looks big but that may be because the mouth is so high, but you may need to make it smaller, course that would make her neck too long, so you'd have to lower her head slightly, and move it to our right a bit, it's jutting out just a tad too much (I make that mistake a lot as well) What Joy said about the lashes were correct. They look too cupie doll. By looking at natural lashes you see they're longer on the outside eye and nearly non-existent as they get towards the inside. Erase most of the lashes on the inner parts of the eyes (upper and lower) and make them longer and more tapered on the outer. And the brows could use some plucking :) One last thing, if you erase the extra part of the finger and just leave the tips (and make them just a little smaller) they'd fit better.

These are just suggestions, observations, smart allecky know it all stuff. You can just take it in for next time or not.

this is lovely. my favorite thing is her hair. looks so soft!! the eye is sexy too!! =]

Very nice, i love her nose.

cool effects [the blurriness]. like she's in the city or somethin

This is beautiful ^^

Well damn, nice first draw. It looks like some cartoons where they put animated characters behind a real bg. Welcome aboard Coquita.