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drawn in 35 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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HunterKiller_ (May 18, 2007)
Just testing my anatomy once again.
Crits welcome.
HunterKiller_ (May 18, 2007)
drawn in 29 min
Qwerty_Wittle_Fawah (May 18, 2007)
She's got some major hips!!! I think the shape is generally great, but there is something weird about her right leg...I think maybe the upper thigh needs to be a little thinner and there should be a space in that area...not sure.

Can't wait to see what you are going to do with this
HunterKiller_ (May 18, 2007)
drawn in 5 min
Lowered her crotch and thickened up her arms a little.
Sweetcell (May 18, 2007)
If I may, her hips are a bit too high and bony, the waist should curve a bit more before hitting the hip bone. And the crotch and belly button need to be lowered a bit more, but overall Hunter BONZA.
JK-Arts (May 18, 2007)
i agree with a bit of that i think work may need to be done on the shoulder neck area
davincipoppalag (May 18, 2007)
Something about the hand on our right ..her left...looks like the arm and hand are too small ? I dunno.. I like it anyway and I can't do it
HunterKiller_ (May 18, 2007)
Thanks for the comments.

Sweetcell: The large hips are intentional, that's how like to draw em'. =P I agree with the rest. Thanks.
JK-Arts: I'm pretty poor in that area, yes.
Dave: You're right, it is too short. You can do it if you practice! =]
Qwerty_Wittle_Fawah (May 19, 2007)
The size of her hips are fine...but the only thing that is weird is the position of her crotch at the angle she is posing...I don't want to be picky but you said you want criticism :-)

I greatly appreciate that her hips are big :-) Cuz not all women are a size 2

Anyway I think the position that she is in, you might want to move her crotch toward your left it would look anatomically right...you should look at Crimson Kings stuff he always has the anatomy right...in a really crazy squeued way :-D
Sweetcell (May 19, 2007)
I said bony not big, I myself wish I was that thin. And the crotch does need to be lowered but I repeat myself.
mooki (May 19, 2007)
i loveth, im workin on anatomy too, this looks perty hot to me so fars
Kloxboy (May 19, 2007)
That's tight Hunter. I really like the direction you're going. You're skills are certainly growing.
HunterKiller_ (May 19, 2007)
Thanks again everyone.

Qwerty: I see what you mean. I've screwed up the weight placement. In my drawing, her left leg taking most of the weight, when really the opposite leg should be the weight bearer. It's a tricky thing. ;)
Sweetcell: Oh yeah, you didn't even say big. I misread, sorry. x.x
mooki: Graci. =)
Kloxboy: Thanks broski. Good to know that all the time spent hasn't gone to waste.
DeadlyBlondeArcher (May 19, 2007)
I'm not gonna go with the general "nitpick shit to death" thing going on here, (I know you're open to criticism, that's why you're getting better all the time, I just don't see anything to be critical about, here)

I would like to say that in all of your female form sketches, there's a very appealing curvey flowing femininity that comes across in each one, and the proportions don't have to be exactly correct for them to be very pleasing to view. I absolutely love the movement of the hands in this one, and the exaggerated pelvic structure.
Sweetcell (May 19, 2007)
No not you Hunter, but s'allright. :)
enjoydotcom (May 20, 2007)
I love the pencil look of this, and if you're doing this without ref: applause applause.
It makes me wanna do a nude too, Ghe ghe... but I'm no good without refs, maybe gonna do myself. Hope that doesn't sound sick...
HunterKiller_ (edited May 20, 2007)
Cindy: You're too kind, Cindy. =)
Sweetcell: Not me what?
Enjoy:
maybe gonna do myself.
LOL! It's ok, we all do ourselves sometimes. ;)
Pseudonymous (May 22, 2007)
Good job. If it's supposed to be somewhat cartoonish, I think it's perfect. If you're going for realism, I'd give a few tips but I like it the way it is.
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